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Who was looking at Maki? The boys? Nope. The girl talking. Therefore, a comma after "boys" would be appreciated.<br>
Actually, make it "I-It's not like I got scared of boys or anything, looking at how Maki wa acting earlier! Okay?" because the current phrasing is pretty clumsy.
Actually, make it "I-It's not like I got scared of boys or anything, looking at how Maki was acting earlier! Okay?" because the current phrasing is pretty clumsy.
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This might be a good time to say that if you want to (pretend to) be an editor, learning something about comma usage would be helpful.
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That's not a real word, unless Urban Dictionary is your preferred dictionary. Mizushima doesn't strike me as a big fan of UD.<br>
But hey, at least you didn't fuck up anything el� Wait. Six monthiversary? That's like "six anniversary". I guess you <i>could</i> learn something about using hyphens once you figure out the basics of using commas, but that sounds like too much effort. Maybe you should just stick to using words that exist, and keep things simple.
But hey, at least you didn't fuck up anything el— Wait. Six monthiversary? That's like "six anniversary". I guess you <i>could</i> learn something about using hyphens once you figure out the basics of using commas, but that sounds like too much effort. Maybe you should just stick to using words that exist, and keep things simple.
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Nope. That is not how these girls talk. At all.
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Well, it went so quickly that there isn't really much to say about it.<br>
herkz � too quick for commas.
herkz — too quick for commas.
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"1984 The Anime" puts a whole new spin on the Big Brother agenda... (I'm afraid nobody in Commie gets this =/)
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I can see that you're slowly getting into the business of using hyphens, but i'm afraid you're doing it wrong.<br>
You want an adverb here, not an adjective � unless you normally say, "That house is distant," rather than "That house is far."
You want an adverb here, not an adjective — unless you normally say, "That house is distant," rather than "That house is far."
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Aside from the awkward phrasing, you're missing a period.
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